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               on our local, Rotterdam. We do not see this as a turn towards some
               purely localist vision. We still wish to summon the best of what
               Relearn can offer: an transnationalist perspective and a chance to
-              experience new and old ideas. We aim to explore the importance of
+              experience new and old ideas.
-              self-organisation and the use of experimental tools to build
+            </p>
-              alternative systems and economies within the urban fabric of
+            <p>
-              Rotterdam. We will be focusing on the materialities of the
+              We aim to explore the importance of self-organisation and the use
-              everyday — e.g. even the most modest of actions, such as
+              of experimental tools to build alternative systems and economies
-              purchasing or disposing of any of the trillions of plastic objects
+              within the urban fabric of Rotterdam. We will be focusing on the
-              causes them to circulate through the twenty-first century and
+              materialities of the everyday — e.g. even the most modest of
-              thousands of years into the future.
+              actions, such as purchasing or disposing of any of the trillions
+              of plastic objects causes them to circulate through the
+              twenty-first century and thousands of years into the future.
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             <li>
               What we offer: <br />
               <br />
-              <span class="stars">*</span> 3 days of focused discussions, experiments, exercises and
+              <span class="stars">*</span> 3 days of focused discussions,
-              speculation in various locations in Rotterdam <br />
+              experiments, exercises and speculation in various locations in
+              Rotterdam <br />
               <br />
-              <span class="stars">*</span> Rapid SARS-COV2 tests for every participant to make sure we stay
+              <span class="stars">*</span> Rapid SARS-COV2 tests for every
-              as safe as possible <br />
+              participant to make sure we stay as safe as possible <br />
               <br />
-              <span class="stars">*</span> Plenty of snacks and refreshments and 3 vegetarian meals/snacks
+              <span class="stars">*</span> Plenty of snacks and refreshments and
-              a day
+              3 vegetarian meals/snacks a day
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             <br />
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         <div class="anarchive">
           <p class="question">The what and the why of the Anarchive</p>
 
           <p>
-            In the run-up to July, we open up a shared digital space, as a
+            In the run-up to July, we've opened up a shared digital space, as a
-            low-tech hangout and a convivial mode of archiving. Analogous to the
+            low-tech hangout and a convivial mode of anarchiving. Analogous to
-            Relearn practice of archiving collective outputs without a focus on
+            the Relearn practice of archiving collective outputs without a focus
-            specific outcomes, this is our approach: the Relearn "anarchive".
+            on specific outcomes, this is our approach: the Relearn "anarchive".
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             perhaps will run through Relearn.
           </p>
 
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           <p>
             During the face-to-face event, we aim to have in-print forms of the
             anarchive available at hand. We will use the contents as a