diff --git a/hbbs/templates/participate.html b/hbbs/templates/participate.html
index c4daafc..76aeccb 100644
--- a/hbbs/templates/participate.html
+++ b/hbbs/templates/participate.html
@@ -8,15 +8,14 @@
     networking mode. We're lurking in <a href="https://cell.hbbs.decentral1.se">cell.hbbs.decentral1.se</a>.
   </p>
   <p>
-    Practically speaking, we're using the latest version of the <a
+    Practically speaking, we're using the <a
     href="https://github.com/datproject/dat/releases/tag/v14.0.2">Dat
-    command-line interface</a> for sharing. In order to join in, you'll need
-    to download the Dat client for your operating system
+    command-line tool</a> for sharing. To join in, you'll need
+    to download it for your operating system
     (<a href="https://github.com/datproject/dat/releases/download/v14.0.2/dat-14.0.2-linux-x64.zip">Linux</a>,
     <a href="https://github.com/datproject/dat/releases/download/v14.0.2/dat-14.0.2-macos-x64.zip">MacOS</a>,
     <a href="https://github.com/datproject/dat/releases/download/v14.0.2/dat-14.0.2-win-x64.zip">Windows</a>)
-    unzip it and test that it works (on GNU/Linux that is usually tested with the
-    following commands: sudo apt install -y unzip; unzip
+    unzip it and test that it works (on GNU/Linux that is done like so: sudo apt install -y unzip; unzip
     dat-14.0.2-linux-x64.zip; cd dat-14.0.2-linux-x64; ./dat --version) and
     then speak further with others on our
     <a href="https://cell.hbbs.decentral1.se/brewers/channels/file-sharing">file sharing</a> channel.