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event_duration: 6h
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summary: Join us on Monday the 23rd of September for an afternoon or evening of discussion, co-learning and reflection on the housing situation in Rotterdam, our rights as tenants and how we can support each other to work towards solutions for more safe, secure and affordable housing.
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Dear all,
-We are very happy to announce a second Bond Precaire Woonvormen (BPW) *tenant consultation* plus *meet and greet* in Varia on Monday the 23rd of September. You are welcome to join us for an afternoon or evening of discussion, co-learning and reflection on the housing situation in Rotterdam, our rights as tenants and how we can support each other to work towards solutions for more safe, secure and affordable housing.
+We are very happy to host a second Bond Precaire Woonvormen (BPW) *tenant consultation* plus *meet and greet* at Varia on Monday the 23rd of September. You are welcome to join us for an afternoon and evening of discussion, co-learning, reflection on the housing situation in Rotterdam, our rights as tenants and how we can support each other to work towards solutions for more safe, secure and affordable housing.
BPW is a solidarity movement organised by volunteers who support each other based on the conviction that housing is a fundamental right that must be protected.
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-*In the Rotterdam/The Hague region there are many problems with finding and keeping affordable housing. Living has become precarious and expensive. As the BPW is relatively unknown in this region, even though there are a couple of members active in this area, we thought it would be a good idea to organize a tenant consultation in the city of Rotterdam.*
+*In the Rotterdam/The Hague region there are many problems in finding and keeping affordable housing. Living has become precarious and expensive. As the BPW is relatively unknown in this region, even though there are a couple of members active in this area, we thought it would be a good idea to organize a tenant consultation in the city of Rotterdam.*
-*In addition, we are setting up a local department of BPWérs in Rotterdam and The Hague. Do you have the time and would you like to participate? Or do you have questions or ideas about this subject? Then, please feel welcome to join us!*
+*In addition, we are setting up a local department of BPW's in Rotterdam and The Hague. Do you have the time and would you like to participate? Or do you have questions or ideas about this subject? Then, please feel welcome to join us!*
**15:00 - 17:00, Tenant consultation**
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**19.30 - 21:00, BPW meets and greet**
-*We give a short presentation about the activities that the BPW has undertaken to demand housing security for residents. What methods and goals does the BPW have and what can we do together to organise ourselves? Are you interested to participate in a local department of BPW in the The Hague/Rotterdam region?*
+*We give a short presentation about the activities that the BPW has undertaken to demand housing security for residents. What methods and goals does the BPW have and what can we do together to organise ourselves? Are you interested in participating in a local department of BPW in the The Hague/Rotterdam region?*