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           <p>
             In the run-up to July, we've opened up a shared digital space, as a
-            low-tech hangout and a convivial mode of archiving. Analogous to
+            low-tech hangout and a convivial mode of archiving. Analogous to the
-            the Relearn practice of archiving collective outputs without a focus
+            Relearn practice of archiving collective outputs without a focus on
-            on specific outcomes, this is our approach: the Relearn "anarchive".
+            specific outcomes, this is our approach: the Relearn "anarchive".
           </p>
 
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           <p>
             The logbot responds by name and takes as input your submissions for
             the Relearn anarchive. It can also guide you in the ways of working
-            with the anarchive using a special <code>@help</code> message. Once
+            a special <code>@help</code> message. Once the logbot accepts a
-            the logbot accepts a submission it will then make them public:
+            submission it will then make them public:
             <a href="https://vvvvvvaria.org/logs/relearn-2021-anarchive/"
               >vvvvvvaria.org/logs/relearn-2021-anarchive</a
             >.